“We’ve got to go faster!” heart pounding, legs thrusting forward, the bow across his back feeling heavier with each step. “We can’t, I can’t go hurry you can make it.” She fell to the ground landing in the rocky earth. “I can’t leave you,” trying to stop, rocks skidding underneath him, “Were so close!”  Bursting from the earth the rusty red demon ran toward the girl fangs bore. “Go, it’ll be ok!” she knew she was lying it was only a matter of time until it would get her. “I’m sorry.” Taking one last breath he ran away from the girl leaving forever he knew his mission, yet guilt still would rear its head later.
12/7/2009 07:10:40 am

hey I think the beginning of this idea sounds great and can't wait for you to work on it more...


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