Cheating is wrong you say,
Then why do we do it day-to-day?
Is it another's fault?
In schools should it be taught?

If cheating is so wrong,
Then why not write a song?
Tell how the world's corrupt
Just waiting to erupt!

I cheat too,
Do you?
What do you consider cheating?
When day-to-day the competitions heating.

Cheating is wrong you say,
Then why do we do it day-to-day?
Mrs. Kosbob
6/19/2010 11:26:14 pm

Like this homage to the dollar. Especially the line about "debt" clever. I think the ending is a little abrupt. More ideas of greed, if that is where you are going with the hell line might build to that conclusion better. :)

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Kosbob
6/19/2010 11:27:17 pm

It appears that my comment has been put under the wrong poem...oops....I already feel behind technology, and this is just another clear sign of that!

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